Tuesday 4 January 2011

Krishnaleela- 16: Manitham Arivom


Matha pasanga mobile no ketta edukku venum, en kita mobile illannu sollirukken.. aana Ashok annikku keeta udane naan kodututen.. He has got something special and there started our friendhsip..

Ashok kooda pesa aarampiche udane therinjiten avan evlo sweetnu.. Oru ponnu number kidacha udane summa phones, messages panra pasangala irundu Ashok enakku vithiyasama terinjaan.. Aana avan kitta pidikkada onnu, enga messagesa avan friends kooda share pannadu..

Ashok and his co is crossing Leela's classroom

Machi.. Forward messgaes mothama Ashok kita taan irukku pola..

eda vachu da solra?

Dailyum send me some forward messages na ashokku varude..

And they giggle like monkeys

That night

Ennaga Ashok, naama msg panrada unga friends kita elam solrenga?

naa eduvum sollala Leela.. Avangale en messagesa paakuraanga.. Morning naa sila messages delete panna maranduduren

Avanga padikardu enakku prachana illa.. But edukku ada ipdi veliya sollitu irukaanga, kurippa en class cross pannum podhu? Enna ninachitu irukaanga?

Jollya panraanga leela.. Edukku seriousa eduthukkura?

Enakku inda scene pidikaadhunga..

Seri.. Inime apdi panna maatanga

After few days

Ashok and his co is crossing Leela's classroom. While crossing few of his friends, close their mouth. One of the perplexed guy asks them

Ennada aachu?

Naama pesa koodadunnu Ashok vaai pottu pottittaan da..

Pottu podum ashokku knottu potadu yaaru? Aniyayam, arajagam, adakkumurai, sarvadikkaaram.

Ashok beats a guy, summa irukka maatengala da? vaaya mooditu vaanga

Show kaatum shokke, ashoke (and they all shout this in chorus)

That night

Ungala frienda ninachu palaguna adukku neenga thara mariyatha idu thaana Ashok?

Enna Leela, chinna vishayatukku sanda potukitu?

Ungalukku chinna vishyaam theriyalam Ashok, aana enakku illa

Naa enna panna mudiyum, ellar vaayilayum plaster pottu otta mudiyuma sollunga?

Its annoying Ashok.. En class la enna pathi enna ninaippanga? En class guys number ketadukke naa tharla.. ippo ungalukku msg anuppuren therinja, rendu perayum compare panni pesuvaanga

Namakkulla enna irukkunu naama cleara irukkum la.. adu podhum Leela.. Edhukku mathavanga solrada kaadhula vaangittu?

Enaala ungala maadhiri just like that irukka mudiyaadhu..

Ippo enna pannanum Leela?

Onnu unga friends idhu maadhiri panradha niruthanum?

Try panren Leela, but enaala assurance kodukka mudiyaadhu

Seri.. Appo neenga enkooda pesuradhunaala than ivlo prachanainna, inime naama pesa vendaam..

Yosichu thaan pesuriya Leela?

Aama Ashok.. I dont want to lower myself

Seri.. Inime naa pesa vendaam

Bye Ashok

Cut

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3 vaaram aachu (Leela is travelling in bus, Ashok as usual footboard. Camera focuses Leela's face who sees book and looks at Ashok. Ashok turns his face and Leela ignores him.)

Adukkaprom Ashok enkita pesave illa.. Avanga friends en classrom pakkam cross agardhum, katradum kuranjadu.. Adu konjam nimaddiya thaandaalum, Ashok enkita pesama irundadu konjam kastama irundhuchu


Ashok's friend: Enna machi, pena la vachirukka.. Examkku padichitya?

Dei kaalai la amma aasaya thandadu da.. Venaamnu solla manasilla

Appo inniku ella pagesum fill panniduviya?

Munnadi irukkura Anushave thunai..

Kreeeeeeechhhhhhhhh

Bus brakes suddenly and driver gets down. Ashok sees a guy arguing with driver.

Adeeng.. Enmela etha paatiya nee? Mariyaatam vandiya otra..

Driver: Yov kudichirukkiya? Kaalai le ethikitu inge vandu sava sutra..

Paakalam da.. nee epdi vandiya edukkurannu..

Ashok's friend: Annov, kilambu na, exam vera irukku

And four guys come to the aid of drunken man

Guy 1: Enna aachu ba?

Drunken Guy: Namba meleye vandiya etha paakuraan da.. keta overa pesuraan.. ivan epdi inga irundu kilamburaannu paakuren

Guy 2: Inda driver aalungale ipdi thaan.. sema nakkala pochu avangalukku.. Ellam koluppu.. Ippo vacha thaan ivanunga adanguvaanga.. 

Guy 1: Correcta sonna ba.. ennamo avanga veetu roadaatam otta vendiyadhu..

And the words grow stronger and vulgar.. They argue for 10 minutes abusing each other and 2 guys started lying on the road

Edukkura na ethithu thaan edhukkura.. periya pundaiyaatam pesunala.. epdi edukkura paakalam de..

Guy 3: Maapla, nee phone potu innum oru 8 pera koopdu da

Yov kudichitu vandiya oti arajagama panrenga? Naanum bus edukka porardilla.. Police varrum paathukkalam

Guy 1: Paakalam da.. Katchi la engalukku selvaaku irukku.. Carla varama bike la vandadaala ungalluku ilachavaayan aatam theriyudho? Police vandha engalukkum pesa theriyum

The road is blocked and there is big traffic. Girls in bus are tensed

Examkku vera time aaghudu.. En ipdi panraanga? HOD kku phone pannunga de yaarachum..

Ashok steps down

Anne.. Bus edunne

Ashoku, summa iruba.. Kudhichitu vandhiya otitu law ellam pesudu inda naayee.. Police vandha thaan idunga ellam adangum

Ashok goes to that guy.

Anne ezhundunga ne..

Mudiyaadhu

Examkku time aaghudune.. Naanga exam mudichitu thirumba inda vazhiya thaan varuvom.. Appo vazhiya marichitu sanda podunganne.. oru three hours thaan.. sattunu ezhudiputtu vandudurom

Otha.. Oru vaathi solren la.. Nee policea koopdu, CMa kooda koopdu, enga aalunga nagara maatanga.. Ethitu porena, naalaiku inda ooru enna aagumnu paaka nee irukka maata

Periyavan aachennu evlo mariyatha koduthu pesuren.. Adukku nee kodukkura respect idhu thaana?

Ennatha pudunguva nee?

Ashok stamps at his stomach and kicks at his penis

Ayyyyyyoooo Ayyyyyooooo

Panivaa sonnen ezhundudunnu.. Keka maatenu adampidicha idhu thaan

Ashok catches his shirt, lifts him and slaps him left and right

Dei inga oruthan adikkiraan.. ennatha panrenga anga?

Guy 1 comes and Ashok slaps him hard, he starts bleeding

Other guys are scared and start running

Ashok catches the drunken guy..

Ippo naa enna panna porenna, unna pudichippena, ellarum time waste aanadala unna oru ara araivaangalam, seriya.. Machi vaangada

Thambi thambi theriyaama panten ba..

Nee thaane pa police theriyum, CM theriyum sonna? Avanga ellam varattum.. adu varaikkum vilaiyaadalam.. seriya chellam?

Yov enakku yaaraiyum theriyaadhu ya.. Naa mappu la edho olarittu irunden.. Nee vandu adichadula ellame vilangidchu, koodave konjam kalangidichu

Heroism panna varlenna enda mayithukku da neenga padam otrenga?

Thambi vittudu pa..

Avar kita manippu kelu..

Driver sir, theriyaama panten.. Vittuda sollunga..

Kaal la vizhundu kelu da..

He fells at Driver's feet

Kudi.. Nalla Kudi, saturday aana Kalyani pakkam vaa.. naa ange thaan kudippen.. kudichitu vaandi thaan edukkanum.. ipdi road block panna koodadu.. seriya?

And Ashok thrusts 100 rupees in his pocket..

Poi doctora paartu, (and he sees below his stomach) ulkaayathukku marunthu potukko.. Kudichitu thirumbavum vandu alappara panna koodadu

Rombha nandri Ashok thambi

cha.. ennana neenga.. idu moonja paarthale theriyudu, vettuvethunnu.. rendu ara koduthu irundha olunga poi irupaan..

And the bus starts, all girls shouts

Shokke Shokke Ashokee.. Thanks

Ashok smiles

All get down at college, Leela catches up with Ashok

Hi Ashok..

Ashok without looking at her, continues walking

Thanks

and he continues walking

Ashok Ashok Ashok, naa unga kita thaan pesitu irukken

Ungala engeyo paartha maadiri irukke?

nakkala?

Leela thaane.. Neenga enkita pesa maaten sonnengale, adaan recognise pannika mudila

I'm sorry for the other day Ashok

Friendskulla sorry, thanks ellam irukka koodadu Leela.. Naa adhellam perusaave eduthukkala.. Ponnunga konjam munkoobinga.. So neeya pesura varaikkum edhukku disturb pannanum vittuten

All the best for your exams Ashok

Naa ezhuda porardukku en exams varuthapattu thaan aaganum.. Nalla wish panrenga 

And they go to their respective exam halls

After exams Ashok goes to canteen, where students are discussing answers with their question paper

Ashok: Inda padikkira pasangalala thaan da namba college dignity ketu poghudu!

Frnd: En machi?

Paaren innum school pasanga maadhiri qn paper vachu answer discuss pannitu irukaanga.. 1 mark irundaalum paravalaa. 16 markskku usura koduthu ara mani neram discuss panraanga da..

Ellarum unna maadiri talenteda machi!

Otha.. vaai thaan nee.. koodave suthitu border mark la pass aagidu, naa paaru idhuvum arrear thaan

Machi anga paaru da, un aalu azhuvura!

He points to a corner table where Leela is in tears but none around her

Enna da aagirukkum?

vera enna, oru 2 mark la fullstop vaikka maranduruppa, 1 mark poiduchennu feel panra..

And Ashok approaches her..

Ennachu Leela?

Leela wipes her tears

Onnumila ashok

Sollu Leela.. En azhura? Pasanga yaaravadhu thirumbavum..

Illa..

And she breaks again

En azhuren sonna naanum azhuven la

Joke pannadenga ashok.. Naa inniku fail aagiduven

Idukku poi azhurenga?

Rendu semestersa department topper ashok.. School la irundu iduvaraikkum naa fail aanade illa.. Aana inikku

Aiyoo pass aagidalam Leela..

Illa Ashok.. Enakku nambikkaiye illa.. Enda questionkum answer varla.. theory paper na kooda sollalam.. but idu  M3 (Maths -3).. Fulla problems.. nalla padichen ashok.. Answer thappu thappa vara, tensionle matha eduleyume concentrate panna mudila..

Leela.. idellam mattere illa.. Answer varlena fulla wrong aagiduma? paper correct panradukku munnadiye fail aagiduvennu en bayapadra? Enakku nambikka irukku, nee pass aavannu.. azhade..

I dont trust me

Idhu thaan.. padichavangalukku aayiram kavala, 'pass aavoma, first mark edupoma, 2 mark correct ah? step mark varuma? diagram azhaga varanjoma, underline pannoma'nnu enna maadhiri padikadavangalukku ore kavala 'arrear date eppo varum?' 

Leela tries to laugh

Seri vaa naama polaam, inge vitta nee thaniya azhudu canteena vella kaadu aakiduva, aprom nivarana nidhi kettu shankar bhaai (canteen owner name) varuvaaru..

Ashok and Leela start walking

Shankar: Ashoku, epdi exam?

Ashok : Unga Dosa maadiri thaan, uthitaanga 

And they laugh

Ashok and Leela get a share auto and Leela is still silent

Leela, adheye ninachitu irunda adutha examla concentrate panna mudiyaadhu.. Relax and forget.. Aprom oru arrearkku kavalapathu 4 arrear vandha kadhaiya aagidum..

Ashok neenga vera en ipdi pesurenga?

Appo siri Leela.. Un friends yaaravadhu kooda irundurunda avanga kooda unna anupchi iruppen, thaniya irunde. adaan I picked you.. Aprom idhaala problem aachuna thirumba sanda podade

Friends ah? Ellame selfish Ashok.. 

Enna solra?

Naa exam hall vittu azhutute varum podhu oruthi kooda ungala maadiri aaruthala pesala.. Ennamo naan nadikkira maadiri paarthaanga..

Padikkira pasangala ipdi thaan treat pannuvaanga Leela

Water la irukkura sponges maadiri Ashok.. Theva padum podhu use pantu, kaariyam mudinja udane kai kazhuvarthu solrangale, adhu en case la unma.. Avangalukku irukkura doubts, assignments idellam pannum podhu mattum Leela theva.. Exam mudinju oruthi kooda madikka maatanga.. Leave la kooda messaga panna maatanga Ashok.. naa close frienda ninacha Kavitha kooda apdi thaan.. messages paaru Ashok, ellame edhavadhu exam doubts, assignments adhu pathi thaan irukkum.. But ennalaiyum avoid panna mudila.. People are bound by time.. Ovoru nerathukku yaaravadhu depend panni irukkanum..

Puriyudhu Leela.. sila peru edho oru kattayathala palakkuraanga.. andha nerathukku ivanga theva, and avangalukkunu oru life, set irukkum podhu anegama adhukku thaan mukkiya thuvam kodupaanga.. sila emaatrangalai thaangi thaan aaganum Leela.. It makes us stronger

But I feel weak annd vulnerable ashok.. Naama avanga kita unmaiya palagum podhu, avanga ada purinjikaama edho kadamaikkune palaguna kastama irukku Ashok..

Screeech...

Share auto gets punctured

15 minutes walk thaane Leela, main bus standkku, pesite polaam

Ashok and Leela start walking

Enakku edhuvume sari illa Ashok.. Ketta neram. Exams, friends, ippo paaru Share auto kooda

Leela, unna ninacha sirippa irukku. Sambandame illama ellathaiyum connect panra nee.. suyamalama illadha manushangale illa.. Ippo nee oru exam la un friendkku kaatum podhu maatikite vachikko, nee unna kaapathikka thaane pesuva? One's interesta mukkiyama paakum podhu, realtionship value kuranjidum.. Idellam manushangala innum naama kattukura udavura oru experiencea ninachikko..

Ennala adpi irukka mudila Ashok.. Naa ivangalukku ivlo seyyum podhu, avanga adhula konjamaachum seyyalam la? Kavithave ende sila naal msg pannalannu kekkum podhu, adhaan college la pesrome Leela, aprom enna solra.. kashthama irukku Ashok..

First ellaraiyum ore maadiri ninaikarda maatikko Leela.. Illati endha edhirpaarpum ilama palaga kathukko.. Edhirpaarpukkal ilama palagardu kastham thaan.. apdi vaala kathukita emaantrangala thaangikkalam..

And they see a school where students are struggling to cross the road. Vehicles are coming in top speed, and camera focuses to a boy and girl (brother-sister) He is clutching her hand firmly and the sister is scared everytime a vehicle wheezes past

Ashok runs to the school gate and acts as a traffic police for a while. He signals to stop the vehicle and lets the student to cross. Leela folds her arm and watches it with a smile. After helping all the kids to cross, Ashok comes

Idellam enga kathukita ashok?

Naa school padikkum podhu RSP la irundhen.. Private school na avangale oru security, monitor panna yaarachum appoint panni irupaanga, aana government school pasanga paavam.. edho nambalala mudinjadhu..

And a kid waves bye bye to Ashok, he reciprocates

Neenga rombha nallavar ashok

Aiyoo, naa ketta paiyanga.. Daily 10 dum adippen, weekend aana sarakku adippen, enna poi (and he laughs)

Illa Ashok.. Leelanna yaarunnu notice board paarthu therinjukkura alavula thaan naan irukken.. aana neenga, college la irukkura students la irundu, peon, professors, canteen anna ellarkitayum natpa irukkenga.. elaarukkum ungala therinjirukku.. Bus Driver, conductor, idho ippo andha kuzhandaiga kooda ungakitha easya friends aagiduraanga.. neenga manushangala purinji vachirukenga ashok, aana naan (Leela shows her book) Coding, Circuit, Padippu..

enakkum padikkanum aasa thaan.. aana adukku effort thaan edukka mudila

chinna vayasuleye appa poitaaru ashok..

Sorry..

Sethu la pogala.. Odi poitaaru, ennayum aamavaiyum vitutu.. rendum onnu thaane, amma enna ivlo kastapathu valarthaangannu sonna cinematica irukkalam, chinnapulla thanamaavum irukkalam.. amma padra kasthatha paarthu valarndhe enakku suthi irukardhu edhuvum perusaa therila Ashok.. Ellame enakku amma amma thaan.. avangala santhosama paartukanum, kastham illama vachikkanumnu.. 10th la school first, 12th la district first, ippo inge scholarship oda education, en ulagame padippuleye kattitu irukken


solrenu thappa edhuthukaada Leela.. Neraya parent rat race maadhiri avanga kuzhandaigala valarkkuraanga, ketta competitive worldaam.. Padippula thaan kavanam irukkanum, kalvi thaan kan pondradunnu 8th std palamozhi maadiri.. nalla vela enga amma adhu maadhiri enna valakkala (He laughs) Studies, Careernu race la odite irundom vai Leela, aprom thirumbi paartha kooda yaarume irukka maatanga.. Appappo unna aasuvaasa paduthikka maadhiri manushanga kithayum pazhaganum..  Enna thaan padippunnu ariva sambadhichaalum, vaalkai le namakaga irukkura manushanga serthu vachavan thaan arivaali.. Ellathulayum oru retirement period irukku - career, arivu aana friends la mattum adhu illa.. So nambala kandukavangala ninachu varutha padrada vida, ada oru experiencea edhuthu adhutha uravula irundu kavanama iruppome.. nambala miss pannavanga, enda miss pannomnu feel panra alavukku vaazha pazhakikkanum Leela..

Leela looks at Ashok with affection

Ippo naama group photo edukkurom.. adula namakku pudikkada pasanga irundaanganna, adukku group photova kizhichu potrovoma enna illa avanga faces mattum cut panni vachipoma? Avanga nyabagangalai photo irukkura oru asaivatra uyira ninachikko Leela..

Purinjudu Ashok, I wont forget this day

And she tears her question paper

Hey enna idhu?

Padichadu Podhum..

Arrear?

Yaaru, enakka? Naa pass aagiduven Ashok

And they laugh

Ashok - ennoda siripukku marupeyar. Ashok maadhiri oruthan kidaikka naan koduthu vachirukkanumnu first time feel panna moment



Leelaigal Thodarum...

Varrtta..

6 comments:

  1. hai saga oru edaththula oru bad word irruku ungalukku girl readersum irrukkaanga so if you don't mind athai edit pannidungalean; an humble request

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  2. firstu irukkatum.. kadha epdi poghudu? :P

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  3. kadhai as usual kalakkalaa poguthu but; antha wordsai neekidalaamea please

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  4. but i like main hero intha flash back herovai vida enakku avaruthaan pidichu irrunthathu; avarai eppa thirumbavum main flowkku kondu varuveengannu aavaloda waitinggguuuuuuuuu; appuram intha comment moderationai remove pannidalaamea ovorumuraiyum commenttu podurappo ithooda panjaayaththaa irrukupaa

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  5. kadhai nalla super-ah poguthu Karthik.. :)

    aana ashok than pala masala pada heroes ah nyabaga paduthurar :(

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